On your mark, get set Bang!
Underwater athlete 42 took the lead for New Zealand, and he had short hair, long legs and yellow flippers on. He was doing the hurdles underwater, he was jumping over them over them and sprinting as fast as he could.He was surrounded by beautiful fishe's, and he carried on. I was swimming and saw the finish line, but it was far away. My muscle were hurting.Will I be first or second because the other olympic people are catching up.I tried and tried and then I sprinted like a cheetah and I was sprinting and jumping very fast. I won!

kia ora Shreeya, I like how you said about the boy.
ReplyDeleteI have seen the picture you are writing about Shreeya.Well done for describing the picture through words.
ReplyDeleteWhat sentence starter would you use for the picture above?.
Mine would start something like this.....I was swimming in the bath tub when I ducked my head under the water and saw 3 very tiny children with hoops.