I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like the use of the punctuation Shreeya.It made your story easy to read. One thing that was missing though,were question marks.I noticed that there were a few questions and there were no question marks to finish the sentence. How much did the dog cost you and who is going to look after it while you are at school?.
I like the use of the punctuation Shreeya.It made your story easy to read.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that was missing though,were question marks.I noticed that there were a few questions and there were no question marks to finish the sentence.
How much did the dog cost you and who is going to look after it while you are at school?.